magistrate: The arc of the Earth in dark space. (Default)
magistrate ([personal profile] magistrate) wrote 2010-10-11 08:24 pm (UTC)

The poem seems to be full of turns and paradoxes. I keep re-reading it and finding new things. It attests so much and yet asserts so little; I have to stop and think to see if it's trying to say anything. Descriptive instead of prescriptive. Here's another bit:

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"What comes from your willing hands I take. I beg for nothing more."
"Yes, yes, I know you, modest mendicant, you ask for all that one has."

"If there be a stray flower for me I will wear it in my heart."
"But if there be thorns?"
"I will endure them."
"Yes, yes, I know you, modest mendicant, you ask for all that one has."

"If but once you should raise your loving eyes to my face it would make my life sweet beyond death."
"But if there by only cruel glances?"
"I will keep them piercing my heart."
"Yes, yes, I know you, modest mendicant, you ask for all that one has."

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