I mentioned this over at
allbingo, but I'm working on a bunch of challenges to get me thinking about short-form plot. Basically, I'm taking the following plot structures:
Six Short-Story Beats
- A situation
- A complication
- A sense of motion
- A crisis (which defies some expectation)
- A change in direction
- A resolution
The Seven-Point Plot Structure:
- a character,
- in a situation,
- with a problem,
- who tries repeatedly to solve his problem,
- but repeatedly fails, (usually making the problem worse),
- then, at the climax of the story, makes a final attempt (which might either succeed or fail, depending on the kind of story it is), after which
- the result is “validated” in a way that makes it clear that what we saw was, in fact, the final result.
The Hero's Journey:
- The hero is confronted with a challenge,
- rejects it,
- but then is forced (or allowed) to accept it.
- He travels on the road of trials,
- gathering powers and allies, and
- confronts evil—only to be defeated.
- This leads to a dark night of the soul, after which
- the hero makes a leap of faith that allows him to
- confront evil again and be victorious.
- Finally, the student becomes the teacher.
Three Short-Story Essentials
- Require the character to make a choice,
- show that choice by actions, and
- those actions must have consequences.
...three of which I found discussed at Philip Brewer's blog, and one of which I put together after thinking about successful short stories on my own.
I'm trying to take these structures and write extremely short stories/synopses with them – using one sentence for each point in the list.
I'm also finding it surprisingly difficult.
But I figured that while I was striving and trying new things, I might as well put the results up for people to see (and quite possibly best :P ). Just to keep things organized in this post, the card I'm using is below, and I'll link my fills for the squares.
| Situation: Deliverance Setting: Forbidden Zone Complication: I Told You So |
Situation: Revolt Setting: Spy School Complication: Out of Ammo |
Situation: Abduction Setting: Bug War Complication: Hopelessly Outnumbered |
Situation: Self-sacrifice for kin Setting: Torture Cellar Complication: Keep It Safe from Them |
Situation: Daring enterprise Setting: Elevator Complication: Something Went Click |
| Situation: Self-sacrifice for an ideal Setting: Genius Loci Complication: Are You a God? |
Situation: Pursuit Setting: Inside a Computer System Complication: Stranded in a Blizzard |
Situation: Obtaining Setting: Underground City Complication: Caught in Bed Together |
Situation: Ambition Setting: Abandoned Laboratory Complication: On Fire |
Situation: An enemy loved Setting: Hotel California Complication: It Looks Hungry |
| Situation: Crime pursued by vengeance Setting: Red Light District Complication: Everything Is Spiders |
Situation: Involuntary crimes of love Setting: City of Canals Complication: Pinned by a Boulder |
Situation: Recovery of a lost one Setting: After the End Complication: Hull Breach |
Situation: Conflict with a god Setting: Prehistory Complication: It's a Bomb! |
Situation: Remorse Setting: Youth Center Complication: Stumbling in the Dark |
| Situation: Crimes of love Setting: Golden Age of Piracy Complication: Snake Pit |
Situation: Adultery Setting: The War Room Complication: It Happens to a Lot of Guys |
Situation: Slaying of kin unrecognized Setting: Last Fertile Region Complication: I Thought You Brought It |
Situation: Rivalry of kin Setting: Opium Den Complication: No Parachute |
Situation: Enmity of kin Setting: Sapient Ship Complication: Falsely Accused |
| Situation: Discovery of the dishonour of a loved one Setting: Herland Complication: Knife in the Back |
Situation: Supplication Setting: Cardboard Prison Complication: Locked in with Monster |
Situation: The enigma Setting: Galactic Sargasso Complication: Only One Spacesuit Left |
Situation: Erroneous judgement Setting: Death World Complication: ... 05 ... 04 ... 03 ... |
Situation: Fatal imprudence Setting: Bazaar of the Bizarre Complication: Naked in Public |